Reviews for Cursed by Ayaika

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InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 80) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

Sorry to tell you. Since I last left a review, I have noticed that several things didn't make that much sense, or it just felt like your missing a few chapters. What happened during that time that Kagome ended up staying with Sesshoumaru for a week? It wasn't till later that I also noticed that you never mentioned that Sesshoumaru was supposed to kill everyone on some night because of a spell that us readers barely heard any hint of on Sesshoumaru himself besides a flute sound when he talked to Kagome and collasped. When your summary talks about Kagome under a spell? I'm confused. In a couple of parts it felt like you were also missing those few chapters that helped connect them. I don't feel a connection between your two main characters besides sesshoumaru's agravation at her not listening to him. Maybe a few small chapters on what the situation is. If I missed something please send me a pm!


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 29) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

Hiya! This is awesome so far. Though I love the long chapter types, may I vote for 1 long chapter every 50 chapters?


roberta. (Chapter 95) - Thu 03 Mar 2016

Wow the 200 word count makes a big difference. I like it. Great update


Zeelian (Chapter 87) - Mon 29 Feb 2016

Vile = Horrible, awful, repulsive (ie Naraku, the vile hanyo)
Vial = small container for liquids (ie a vial of water)


hana sora (Chapter 92) - Mon 29 Feb 2016

Kind of cconfused wheres the curse going


roberta. (Chapter 92) - Mon 29 Feb 2016

Sure longer chaps would be great


JoLynn (Chapter 86) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

This took the weirdest turn


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 86) - Sun 14 Feb 2016

Good, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day! 


roberta. (Chapter 86) - Fri 12 Feb 2016

Great update


roberta. (Chapter 83) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Thanks for the update


Saiya (Chapter 74) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Ouch.


Mona (Chapter 74) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

I hope you can update more soon... I wonder why Kagome seems to be battling alone.


roberta. (Chapter 72) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Yes please thank you


Mona (Chapter 72) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Awesome updates... Looking forward to more to come.


cassandra (Chapter 71) - Wed 06 Jan 2016

I don't get it. I'm  loving your story but I'm a little bit confused.  Is sesshomaru really dead or is he in a death like sleep like in sleeping Beauty? I'm not making fun of your story by saying that whole sleeping Beauty thing. Well if you think about it he IS kinda beautiful for a man. I can't wait to see what happens next! 


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 68) - Thu 31 Dec 2015

Suspense! Need more!


Mona (Chapter 68) - Thu 31 Dec 2015

Hope you update again soon.


roberta. (Chapter 68) - Wed 30 Dec 2015

Thanks for the updates have a happy new years


cassandra (Chapter 65) - Sun 20 Dec 2015

I hope none of sesshomarus people try to hurt her after that little speech on sesshomaru choosing death since kagome couldn't lift the spell she supposedly put on him. Can't wait to see what happens next! 


roberta. (Chapter 62) - Thu 10 Dec 2015

Sesshy has great trust in his miko

 


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