Niji (Chapter 7) - Sat 24 Dec 2022

Awww omg what a lovely story 


FayeMegan (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Jun 2016

It was a very charming story. The only thing is that it requires some puncuation and gammar fixes.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 7) - Mon 23 May 2016

Great story! I loved it! Perhaps someone could draw Kagome, Sesshomaru and their children?

Maybe you could write a sequel of the family set in the future? Well, at least think about it. Thanks!


KEdakumi (Chapter 7) - Sun 22 May 2016

Such a good story.  Loved it.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Fri 20 May 2016

I meant the review for chapter 7 and basically the whole story. Sorry about mix up on the chapters.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 May 2016

This turned out to be a lovely story. Nicely written. I loved it. Great story.


roberta. (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 May 2016

Great end to a great stoiry


roberta. (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Mar 2016

Well that was interesting


roberta. (Chapter 5) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Great chap


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Feb 2016

More, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day! 


roberta. (Chapter 4) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Great update and yes love sesshy the dad.


Mona (Chapter 3) - Sun 07 Feb 2016

Wow...  Usually it's first comes marriage (mating) then comes baby (pup), I guess he got carried away unless he is already mated but desires Kagome.


roberta. (Chapter 3) - Sat 06 Feb 2016

On the 10th can't wait.


roberta. (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Feb 2016

Wow this story go me hook line and sinker.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 06 Feb 2016

Both chapters are nice, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!


Literary Fan (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 Jan 2016

When I saw this labeled Complete I went, "noooooo'". This is a very good story. It was sweet and even though it is only two chapters it didn't feel rushed. Any chance you might continue it? Pretty please. Regardless, excellent story and hope to see more stories from you soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 Dec 2014

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 Dec 2014

So fluffy and perfect for this season.  I liked the way you characterized Sesshomaru and Kagome and thier odd situation.  You made it seem realisitc.  I also echo the sentiments of the previous two reviewers and see the potential for a further chapter or two that shows Kagome and Sesshomaru's interactions further down the road.  

Great job!


Elizabeth (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Dec 2014

This was really sweet and even though it's completed, I could see that it has the potential to have another chapter or two ;p. Thanks for the warm fuzzy at the end there. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Dec 2014

This was a very nicely written little tale. There were a couple of misspells and grammatical errors but nothing detrimental to the story. This seems like it would be a good beginning to a longer story...hint...hint. Not expecting one but just asking if there would be more to this one-shot? Great job!


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