Nice chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas!
Great story, keep it coming. Happy Thanksgiving!
Clara (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Nov 2014
I really like this idea!! Maybe just be a little more careful with spelling and grammar? It would make it more pleasant to read!! But I really look forward to the rest of the story!
katie (Chapter 8) - Mon 17 Nov 2014
That is so good please keep going I would like to know what will happen
katie (Chapter 8) - Mon 17 Nov 2014
That is so good please keep going I would like to know what will happen
Awesome idea! I hope you will continue soon! ^-^
this is really good i like tha you decided to make a story plot like aladdin, i cant wait to find out what happens next.
Camille (Chapter 3) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
Update soon please !
Camille (Chapter 2) - Tue 14 Oct 2014
This is really interesting , I'll be waiting for a update (:
Interesting and you spelled Prologue wrong
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