well at least we have a face thats something. great two chapters. love the detailed picture i got in my head of the scene, very realistic. love love this story.
| I'm really enjoying your story so far. The dream/memory sequence, although frustrating for Sesshou, is a nice touch. He as well as we are emphasizing with the girl while helpless to aid her. I wondered how he would come to know her and I'm glad you didn't go the 'it was fate' route. I have to know. Were you inspired by "Shatter Me" by Lindsey Sterling and Lizzy Hale? If you haven't heard of it, you should look up the video on YouTube.     
 | now we get a little insight to happen in her background, nice background.    
 
Midian (Chapter 13) - Fri 17 Oct 2014 | An origional story with great writing i am amazed how few reviews it has vs. some of the cookie cutter stuff    
 | hey!!! thats not fair!!! i want to know the second name!!! :-( sad. its really getting interesting, though i would put somewhere in this chapter that Sesshomaru is dreaming.    
 | awwww maybe he will find the answers he seeks!!!!    
 | really good, now would be a good time to throw in a dream about the girl in the globe, just a thought or opinion. i wish you would update sooner than later but its really good.    
 | Keep it coming!    
 | I really like the gentle feel of this story. The plot is original too. I hope you will continue this! :)    
 | oh wow, this is really original i love it! i cant wait to see if it actually does breaks and lets her out or if sesshomaru makes a wish to set her free. i am on the edge of my seat! please update soon.    
 | oooooooooo I like this plot!a very vexing mystery!!!
    
 
Kat c (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Oct 2014 | Amazing story can't wait for the update    
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