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AnimeLady04 (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

lol I wish I could see a purple Jaken!
I cannot wait to find out what Jakotsu is doing to Inu though!!!!!!!
Really enjoying your story - it's cute and funny!


Eva (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

Oh the thought of Jiji and Touga verbally sparring is hysterical. I agree that a guest appearance from Yasha and Jakotsu in some way is something I'm looking forward to.


Elizabeth (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

hehe, I the the banter between them. I can't wait for the next update :)


Silence-Midnight (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

Very good written!!!!

I really like this story and can´t wait for the next chapter.

And Jaken is almost back to normal? Such a pity!!!!

Yes Alphas are very proud and i think the Supreme Alpha will rather die before he retires^^

 

Until next time

Silence-Midnight


c plumley (Chapter 7) - Sat 18 Oct 2014

This is just so cute. I loved reading each e-mail and the p.s.


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Oct 2014

I am loving this story!

ITs very cute and I've had a great many laughs!


Mistress SleepWell (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Oct 2014

this story gives me life! It makes me smile!


Silence-Midnight (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Oct 2014

Oh Jaken so deserved this!!!!

Such a good story so far. I really love the way they both communicate with each other.

Can´t await the next chapter.

Have fun to write^^

 

Silence-Midnight


Tana_san (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

First, please allow me to apologise for my comment about a beta. I didn't know that you are not an English speaking writing team. I ammend this statement then to say that you are doing an awesome job for not having English as your first language! I've have been told by many that English is the hardest language to learn. I wish I could beta for you myself but with my type of disabilities I sleep alot and even though I'm American born, my grammar and puncuation isn't as well as it should be as I find myself getting older. I hope someone comes through for the beta job for you just to make this fic the most it can be as I find it very well written and funny.

I also like to say, I think it would be funny also to maybe have a letter or so from Jak and InuYasha like Bella suggested. I'm sure Inu will figure that the thinga she suggested for Jak to do to him will be figured out as only she would know the things that irritate him so and Jak would be so bold as to do anything to Inu just to get a rise out of him.

Gramps was the one who hurt InuPapa?!? Wow, I always thought he was just a harmless old dude. Guess gramps does know a few things for real! So funny. Oh and yes, maybe Kagome going along to the zoo! It's a good start for them to get to know each other on a more personal level.

Again, you all are doing a great job with this fic. Thank you for sharing your talents with us as without writers like you, I would be a very lonely woman as these fics are my greatest entertainment and I love the adventures you all take me on. Gentle hugs and many kisses,  JEN


maira (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

I'm loving this story so far hope you keep it going XD although I can see how you might need to change the formats before to long there's only so much people talk through email before they start using more convenient methods


Eva (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

I'm so glad to have come across this littlepiece. I'm enjoying the banter (and the judicious use of Jakotsu) very much. I'll be sure to check out your other solo and team stories. Thanks for the entertainment.


Bella (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

LOVE THIS!!! You guys are awesome writers. I can't wait to see how the story progresses.  And I would love to see an email from Jak and inuyasha thrown in somewhere along the way... It would be hilarious. 


rose (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

next chapter please


Tessitura (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

*sneeky onna* She is worthly of being a kitsune mommy. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

Great story, keep it coming.


Mistress SleepWell (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

Please write more! I Love this story!


Tana_san (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Oct 2014

In a way, I'd like to feel sorry for Jaken, but he pretty much is just digging his own grave with voicing every little thing that crosses his mind without even giving a thought to ALL the previous punishments he's had over the years. One would think he's learn something! I can imagine a pinkish purple Jaken making like a chandelier on the ceiling with those big bulbous eyes rolling round and round.

I have just one suggestion and please it is of no real concern of mine as I am used to correcting errors and adding correct wording on fics, but it could use a beta to catch these pesky little problems. Please don't take offense as it is not what was intended.  JEN


Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

I'm so loving these letters.


NightQueen (Chapter 6) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

This fic makes me laugh and smile at the same time!! And after the day I've had I truly appreciate that more than anything else!! Fabulous!


Himura Asami (Chapter 6) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

Thanks fo rclearing that up. I was worried that she would rant for a second.


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