Reviews for Crashing Kagome by Avadrea

maira (Chapter 6) - Thu 20 Jul 2017

this is alot of fun I hope you pick it back up!


Toni (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Jun 2017

Hope you continue. Really like it

 


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 6) - Thu 23 Mar 2017

Nooouuu! It was such a great story! I wanna read more aww


Katrina Kee (Chapter 6) - Tue 26 Apr 2016

So I am going to hazard a guess and say that in order to inherit everything one of the brothers must be married. And the brother to inherit must get married before the other one. Ha ha. Of course Sesshomaru doesn't even have a girlfriend, mush less any female acquaintences while Inuyasha has a fiancee. Now who wouldn't be angry, especially if they worked so hard (20+ years) helping dear old Dad build up an empire, only to have it possibly snatched away from him by Inuyasha at the last minute? I am sure that Inuyasha isn't interested in the business, otherwise he probably would have become involved in it somehow way before now, so I am guessing that this clause is also for Sesshomaru to find someone to share his life with. Perhaps his Father noticed how lonely Sess was over those 20 years and wanted him to have someone to share his life and not be so lonely? This was his only way to ensure that Sesshomaru got a wife (and love?) since he wanted the business he worked so hard for.

As for Inuyasha, well he might just try to marry first just to spite Sesshomaru, but he would end up running the business right into the ground if he doesn't have a clue about it. Or he would just sell it. Then he would most likely have to take all of that money and use it for all of the security guards he can buy (and plan his funeral) cause Sesshomaru will be out for his blood.

Now since Sess has a very stratigic mind, I'm going to bet that once he gets back to Kagome's home, he will take one look at her and those wheels inside his head will start spinning so fast thatthey'll break the sound barrier! Yup!!! Kagome is doomed! Once Sess locks his sights on her Kagome is a goner! Start running Kags! Sess is on the hunt!!! (Yummy! Lucky Kagome!!!)

Please update soon! Your stories are great!


Rosalynn (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Oct 2014

Very good. Loving it so far. More please


Eva (Chapter 4) - Sun 21 Sep 2014

Nice hook to get him to take a second look. I can see the sweat drops and nose bleeds in my mind's eye. Now the challenge is how to get them (and keep them) together without using the tired but the beast wants. 


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Sep 2014

Lol... Just lol.

Keep it up!


maira (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Sep 2014

Oh dear...


Caera (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Sep 2014

Absolutely hilarious chapter!!! I love the last part where he is stil staring after 20 mins...hahaha


KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Whoops! Too funny! Time to run screaming back to the bedroom and call Inuyasha and chew him out for putting her in this position.... or maybe just run screaming.... Can't wait to see what happens.


cassandra (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Lol! I can't believe that she actually forgot sesshomaru was staying with her. I can't wait to see what happens next! 


Miss C (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

LOL Poor Kagome!!


maira (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Hahahaha oh poor girl


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Tue 09 Sep 2014

Great chapter, keep it coming. 


Marina (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Sep 2014

Interesting start. Though you might need to go on to explain why exactly Sesshomaru had to stay with Kagome. You have the bit about him not staying with Inuyasha because of Kikyo but why not a hotel/motel? 


kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

I like the premise of this story so far.  And I can't wait to find out what the stipulations are.


Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Sep 2014

This sounds Fun!!!

Please do update when you can.


CookieAsylum (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Sep 2014

Oh my goodness! I'm so glad you finally posted this on Dokuga! I remember reading it on the Dokuga_Contest site when it was still active, and this was probably one of my favorite series of entries. Super excited to see this continued!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sun 31 Aug 2014

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


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