Awesome chapter. Just a couple spelling mistakes that u found but other then that I curious as to know what those black wires are and do. Updat soon :)

I love the update! You're doing a really good job of setting the storyline.

Also, your description of locations and settings is so detailed and vivid, I can just imagine how beautiful it is! The whole story is so mystical! I love it!

Anxiously awaiting the next update. Poor Sesshomaru, stuck with the Keeper!

thank you for the update really good .

O.O wow..... I wonder where you're going to bring this. Nvm that, I'll keep reading ^-^

Great chapter, keep it coming.

really like it so far thanks.

O wow...this story has so much great potential. I love the opener and the mysterious circumstances around our 'Keeper'. Yes! Sesshomaru makes an appearance! So exciting. I can't wait to see how the story progresses. It's a new concept and very promising. Good work and update soon please!

This story is interesting, keep it coming.

Very interesting beginning. Definitely have my me as a keeper:3

Very interesting story plot. I am looking forward to future chapters. Good job in your writing skills.