Totally confused while reading this, Sesshoumaru started yelling about a book. Me as the reader wasn't told of a book at all so it derailed the story. Sorry to say that you may need to work on executing your ideas as not to confuse the reader.
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs tomorrow. This story nice and I enjoyed it!
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