Reviews for Healing Carefully by Caedes

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InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 Jul 2014

Awh cute!!!!! Can't wait till you've got another chaper!


Eden (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 Jul 2014

Hey. I am loving this story. Can't wait to read what happens next


tory (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jul 2014

Loved the first chapter. Can't wait to read more.


gildedglass (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jul 2014
If it's japan then why are some of Thr names English and some of the names jaPanese?

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


cynthia (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

awww so cute. I cant wait for more. thanks for th great start.


Elizabeth (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

This is a good one. I like how you've set it up so far and can't wait for more! I love how you have made Kikyo and Kagome have a close relationship. Where is the story set? Japan or America? Will Sesshoumaru be introduced in the next chapter? I am interested to see how you will have the story progess! 

Also, if I may suggest that you insert some sort of break in between sections - such as moving from scene to scene (i.e. Kik and Kag's conversation to Kagome tucking in Shippo at night, and to Kagome in the ER. There are a few other breaks needed, but I just thought you shoudl know for flow and ease of reading.) 


Elizabeth (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

One mistake.  It's called Skin Grafting.

 

Interesting idea for a story.  I'm not gonna judge based on one chapter, so I am looking forward to more.  Hope they come soon =)


Marissa (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

;o i like this. a lot. >.> stupid Kikyo, i always hated her 


Selena Ravo (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jul 2014

Love it!


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