Reviews for Avaricious by Sesshysgirl-08

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Lady of the Frozen Heart (Chapter 1) - Thu 10 Jul 2014

I liked the story and would love to read more. Please write more ^_^


Itoe Hime (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Jul 2014

yes, definately continue! I would love to see a gradual blooming relationship between to two, or if you would like to keep it dark, at least very steamy  lemons...

 

If you decide to continue, my question would be, 'where's Inuyasha?' For this one-shot, Inuyasha's presence wasn't needed or wasn't a necessity...but one does wonder about where and what happened to him. A backround story is appreciated to sate your reader's curiosity! ;)

Thx~


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

this was dark, but i feel like you need to give a warning that this is a rape fic. the way your summary sounds dosnt make it sound like a rape fic, this couls be very traumatizing to someone who reads it unknowingly. while well writen, it needs a warning


Thorn_the_Laughing_Willow (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I liked it a lot, a little dark, boviously, but that was the angle. You had a few spelling errors, but nothing too noticable. I would love a continuation!


Koi (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

This was soooo good! I would love to know what happens to Kagome future wise! Great job on bringing Sesshy's true demonic self out. I hope you make a sequel? 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered on tv, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

would really like a follow up to this


Sarah (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Yes love it please continue


Elizabeth (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Wow!!! I really loved this one. I definitely think it should be continued. I agree that it is great to show Sesshoumaru's demonic nature.


Lone saiyan woman (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I really enjoyed your descriptions of his descent into obsession and insanty. Poor Kagome, I hope she doesn't fall in love with him after all he is a rapist. God knows I hate the stories of Kagome accepting rape, something tells me though Sesshoumaru is satisfied with her body now but will probably be asking for more and she won't give it. I look forward to that, anyway I enjoyed this entry and hope to read more.


satuross (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I also love it when seahoumaru shows his dark side. Sadly fics like this rarely are finished..and sometimes left hanging.


Mina (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Hello! Fantastic story! There were minor grammatical errors, but they really didn't take away from the heart of the story. This was a good piece that conveyed what you wanted to show: His Royal Highness' demonic nature. I would love to see a second installment. 


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