Nice chapter, keep it coming.

Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great story, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Its really fun to read! Oh yeah, when Kagome called out for her mom in the end you wrote calked ( just so you know it :p).  You know, the way you wrot it it doesn't look as if it is your first fanfiction haha.  I will be waiting for the next chapter.  :D

I liked the story,  i hope you continue writting it. Watch out to not make Kagome naive and dumb,  it can be boring ( not that you are doing it). I will wait for your next chapter.  :D