Keep it up, keep it coming.
Inuyasha's death was received very well by Kagome, maybe a little too well in my opinion. Even if she didn't love him, she should have been more saddened by it, after all, they were together for 5 or 6 years! That means a lot!!
Her reaction to his death made her seem a cold person and she accepted Sesshomaru a little bit too soon. Sesshomaru may have been waited for her but for Kagome, Inuyasha died only a couple of weeks ago!!
Not to mention, Inuyasha was killed by Shippo! And Kagome forgave him from the start without first rejecting him!! I mean, Inuyasha was her lover, if not the man she loved! And she just...accepted Shippo just like that.
Shippo, even after 500 years was still in love with Rin and was mourning her and his son's deaths! But Inuyasha was forgotten by Kagome so fast in favor of Sesshomaru...again, made her seem cold!
I could understand for Sesshomaru to start wooing her and be more present in her life to give her time to acclimate to a life without Inuyasha but he was so impatient and, again, she accepted.
The whole story was wonderful but the ending was not how I imagined it to be. Anyway, thanks for doing a story after YoukaiYume's Sketch - Don't Go. I appreciate it.
damn. That was a wicked story. I'm very glad to of read it. Even shed a tear at that last bit:3 thank you!
No Uta (Chapter 8) - Sat 21 Jun 2014
"I've waited long enough" He said with a growl. Oh that Sesshomaru is so dashing. Wow...what a bittersweet ending to an incredible story! Very sad about Inu Yasha.
IVe enjoyed your writing so very much. I'm going to check out your other fics. I wish this story would never end, however I understand that all good things...hehe.
Gratitude for such a wwonderful tale of mixed emotion. I loved every word.
Nicole (Chapter 8) - Sat 21 Jun 2014
That was a wonderfully written ending to a wonderfully written story. You dealt with Shippo, Kagome, and Sesshomaru's reunions and reactions in a very real way, but that leaves the door of the imagination wide open to all three rebuilding good relationships in the future. Thanks for ending it on a happy, fluffy note :D
TKE (Chapter 8) - Sat 21 Jun 2014
wow....awesome story!!!
You're like an evil mastermind who brings people pain through joyous moments.
It's sort of creepy, but mostly cool.
But really, this was perfect.
Keep it coming.
That was intense and so not her fault. Poor Kagome. Poor Shippo. Poor Sesshomaru. Poor Rin,
That was intense and so not her fault. Poor Kagome. Poor Shippo. Poor Sesshomaru. Poor Rin,
joyouki (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
Omg......I was not expecting that! And how terrible to leave chapter on a cliffy lol!
Lexy217 (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
You can't leave it like that!!!!!!!
No Uta (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
What a fantasticly dark chapter! It revealed light on why Sesshomaru & Shippo were upset with her over.
I suppose he had to let her go back and wish to come back to the future on her own.
I like what he wrote in the letter. Poor Kagome was so distraught. As always, I shall eagerly await your next chapter.
It is very sad, but now everything makes sense. Poor Rin.
Despite all the sadness and angst, I really like this chapter. It is very intense and well-written.
First I have to say I love this story. It is so very well written. Now I have to say you tore my heart with the death of Rin and the kit and of the betrayal of Kagome. The man she loved as a son, the man she thought she loved for a mate and the man who she loved as a friend maybe somthing more. I can understand the beginning rage that they may have felt but for them to act as if she had planned it made me hurt for Kagome. I can only hope that for a bit she can be mad at them. Howevef this is not my story but thank you for writting such a strong story that draws such strong emotion. Looking forward to more:-)
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