Wow, what a cool concept for a story - I'm loving this! :) Very well written - your descriptions are vivid and gripping. The shadow creatures in Kagome's visions give me the chills. But *are* they just hallucinations? I wonder... And could there be more to this doctor character than meets the eye?
Looking forward to more :)
Keep it coming.
Dappled shade... damn that's good. I really like that description.
Yeah! Curse that well, Kags. Looking forward to more!
amanda (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Jun 2014
Can't wait for another chapter
amanda (Chapter 8) - Wed 04 Jun 2014
Great chapter. Keep it coming!
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
I can sense how lonely she feels crowded by people and apparitions when she walks outside. Well done!
This story is pretty neat. Can't wait to read more. I like how graphic it is. And the way you write it, actually makes sense.
I'm am more curious over their motivation than what they actually are now. As in, even if they were named, their mystery seems so much deeper. Looking forward to the next one!
Great story, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
amanda (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
This is interesting. I like it!
Good doctor.
hmm... i wonder what they are. Looking forward to more!
Poor girl goes through so much. I can imagine a gaggle of Kagomes from all these angsty fanfics with picket signs protesting.
I wonder was she is lying. Is it because she doesn't want help? Because she knows it's real, and doesn't want to listen to a shrink discount her? I am very curious.
Oooo, I like this Kagome so far.
AAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNND, hooked
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