Great chapter, keep it coming.

This story sounds interesting, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

your story sounds awesome ;)

Good story! Love the idea it has awesome potential. Theres a couple spelling errors but it's not big deal. I'm excited to see where this goes. Good luck! Keep up the good work:)

I like the idea you have going for the story. It's got a new plot, a new setting and good potential.  I think you have great character development as well and I think as you write more that will increase.  Other than a few misspellings (which i do too) and showing Kagome getting the letter after she read it, it was great.  I look forward to reading more.