What an interesting story about everyone being werewolves, loved the pack concepts and all.

Love your story! Besides a few spelling errors, its great! Please update soon!

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Nice chapter, keep it coming

Good stuff. I'm slightly reminded of Wolf's Rain. I used to love that anime! lol

please up date soon all i can say is i love it and want more !

Update soon. I like this story. 

I read this story on fanfiction months ago, it's a great story. Keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

I read this story on fanfiction months, it's a great story. Keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

I found myself laughing at the drinking contest. Very cute! Nice story. I think maybe a little more character description or development would be nice. Just so we can understand the characters the way you want us to see them in this story. Its kinda like the characters just appear in the story, if that makes sense.

So far, I like it. Keep it up!