Hello Author. What an amazing story. I was really emersed in the emotions and cried along with her at times. Thank you for your hard work. Take care. <3 <3 <3
This is terribly well written - terribly, because it pulls you into thier path of grief and confusion, well written because you never let your readers fall into despair. There's a thread holding us up and letting us see through to the end of their loss. I also am fond about how you managed their attraction, never letting it fall into false love. Sometimes comfort is to be more cherished in a relationship than the more torrid emotions that love consists of. Thank you very much for this excellent short.
kate (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jul 2015
oh. my. god.
Breathtaking.
Marissa (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jun 2014
Wow that was so good. Very deep and the emotion really came through in your writing.
Wow. That was deep.
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DAMN, THAT WAS A GOOD FIC!
This was amazing.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Nicole (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2014
| That was fantastic. The emotion of each situation shone through your writing, and the imagery throughout was beautiful (though melancholy).
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2014
Bravo!
Emily (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2014
Nicley done! You may not be entirely hPpy with the way you wrote it, but I enjoyed it immensely!
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