Truthfully, I am confused with the time jumping but I think I am following along correctly lol

Nice idea to have Naraku and Kagome as siblings :D Haven't read something like that in a loong while.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Your story is interesting! Love it! Whatever you do, please don't stop! =]

Next, keep it coming.

You have INSTANTLY caught and ensnared my interest, wondering who caused this massacre! And who is hunting the creature, I wonder? Can't wait for the next update to this riverting story!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Easter!