Reviews for Kill him by Itoe

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SESSHOMARU (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jan 2015

Great story. Please continue


lattie (Chapter 7) - Sat 17 Jan 2015

Inuyasha is so stupid. I wonder what Kagome is going to do when she finds out Sesshomaru is a liar? This is such a good story!


Eva (Chapter 7) - Sat 17 Jan 2015

I adore Shippo. It's good to see he will be growing into a cunning kitsune who know what he wants. I'm so glad he's looking out for his mama's best interest, even if she is to stupid or love sick to look after them herself.


Kxs27 (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Jan 2015

Continue I love reading this fanfic ! I wanna see what happans next !


Ree-san (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Jan 2015

I'm so glad this story isn't dead yet!  I'm really looking forward to the next update!  I'm wondering how he's going to move their relationship forward and not just revenge. 


Eva (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Jan 2015

I'm enjoying the plotting and delicious wickedness of this little tale. It's no where near as simple as the title leads you to believe. I want to compliment you on your English. Despite your protests, you use it very well. Without your comments, only the small differences in punctuation would make me wonder and even then I would have assumed you were using UK format.


Lynansidhe (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Jan 2015

Nice chapter. Thanks for posting


tonya (Chapter 5) - Fri 03 Oct 2014

read all the chapters in one sitting! please update again soon


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Oct 2014

Wow this is so original ! Interesting and captivating!!! I adore it already 


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Oct 2014

I am a little confused at Sesshomaru's thoughts though...

He wants her to be his, he counts her tears and wants her seperated from Inuyasha but he doesn't want Kagome to go to Kouga either. He wants her for himself.

So does he want her to just break Inuyasha? or does he truly want her for himself?
When he thinks about breaking Kagome - is it so he can heal her heart and be with her?

I'm unusre where Sesshomaru is going with this XD

Oh and just to let you know.....
When the characters are talking the " " is between words....Taking the last few sentences of your story, it should be like this:

"You must let go of him.", he said with full seriousness, ,,"Now!"

"What choice do I have, anyway?!", she asked with hiccups in between every word.

Sesshomaru walked closed to her and knelt down on one knee right in front of her. He reached out, took her chin gently in his claws and forced her to look him in the eyes.

"Make him regret his poorly made choice."

Your English is very good though! English is a difficult language to learn because we have so many meanings for just one word lol.....but I am enjoying your story and can't wait for more!


Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Oct 2014

This, like the rest of your stories is indeed excellent!

Looking forward to more.


Jilliene (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Oct 2014

You're English is good! If it wasn't for the odd quotation marks/you mentioning it I wouldn't have thought English wasn't your first language. Can't wait for the next chapter


The-infamous-one (Chapter 4) - Tue 12 Aug 2014

This is an awesome story. I'm quite excited for you to update next. 

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Mon 11 Aug 2014

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 4 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Good chapter, keep it coming


Ree-san (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Aug 2014

I was glad to see the update.  Please don't let the story die.  I'll be looking forward to the next update.


lattie (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Aug 2014

This is awesome! Please continue. ^_^


lattie (Chapter 3) - Mon 28 Apr 2014

Kagome! Why are you acting so evil?! Inuyasha is a jerk but don't let that moron taint you. And don't fall for Sesshy crap either.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Apr 2014

Nice, keep it coming. 


I Love The Stuff I Review (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Apr 2014

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS COMPLETLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Saya Otonashi (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Apr 2014

SQUEAL! !!!!!!!! THIS IS GONNA BE AMAZING!!!!!!!


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