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Sandreline Moon (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

This is a FABULOUS story, and I am very much looking forward to your next chapter!  It was very well written, with an original story line. Well done!

 

~Sandreline


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

Loving the story, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!


Stella Mira (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

I'm so happy to see a fresh story from you, angel! You never disappoint! Your ideas add a note of originality and you know how I simply adore AU stories!!

Your portrayals are amazing! I'm glad to see a confident Kagome, not judgmental, strong and beautiful! She can more than hold her own, and power attracts to power as they say. Sesshomaru practically breathes honor and duty, yet I can definitely see a slight possessiveness here as any red-blooded male should have!

Their first meeting was perfect! Drawn by her blood... I do wonder what you have planned here, what reason there was for her blood speaking to him so strongly? Hm, perhaps the bond of soulmates is at work here? I dunno, I'm just grasping at straws here, but this gives the vibes of 'fated lovers' for sure!

Whoa, such sexual tension, such chemistry between them! I'm surprised the whole forest didn't catch on fire! XDD I do love that it's mutual, too strong to be denied, inescapable!

Your word choice is as ingenious as ever! You know exactly what word to use and where to use it to give an image that will blow my mind away! I love the flow of this and the chapter length is awesome!

I can't wait to see what will happen next, how she will be received at his palace when they find out their lord brought a human miko there. I also love the twist with adding an intended mate! Oh, the complications that will arise when Sayuri-hime will come into the picture!

You have woven an excellent tale here and I can't wait for an update! Soon, yes??


Hassanah (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

you're my fav author right! i love this story!! oh my gosh lol seriously i just love you and your stories!! I've gotten so rusty on writing huff! please update soon new favourite! :)


Starlyte (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

Love the way you started this story,  it's got me completely hooked! It's so different from what I've read recently and that's very refreshing! So cannot wait for the next chapters!!!


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014
I love me a really good-long story, this was really pleasant to read, I'm definitely looking forward to more chapters in the near (very near please :-)) future. Great job BtW!!! :-)

Amy (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

Ok! I do love love love Sesshomaru's portrait and POV. I'm definitely intrigued! Amazing start and I can't wait to read more of your story. :) 


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