Reviews for Frozen by Dreamer

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KyraTekak (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Oct 2017

Great story. Hope for more updates.


Christine (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Dec 2016

Please please write more of this! It is a wonderful story. 


snow (Chapter 5) - Sat 03 Sep 2016

o well done miko XD sounds hot

lol the story is getting very interesting


Higurashi (Chapter 5) - Thu 18 Aug 2016

Please continue this story, i'll be waiting.

Love Sesshy & Kagome after all.


Pikanet128 (Chapter 5) - Fri 12 Aug 2016

I like how he modified the training 

and did not tell her

im liking this story so far 


Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Mon 08 Aug 2016

Elizabeth (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 Aug 2016

Congrats on the help.  All you need is a Beta to fix your spelling errors.

Poor bunny.  I just wish the chapter wasn't so short.


Jaime (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 Aug 2016

Woooo, it was so spicy to see Sesshomaru act like that.

 

Looking foward for what comes next!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Jul 2016

I really like your story. It is something a little different. It is nicely written except for the spelling errors that I noticed through out the chapters one through four. But in chapter four I only found maybe three at the most. 

For instance this line: a arm graved mine and forcefully turned me to face him - graved should have been grazed and I think it would have read better as "his arm grazed mine and forcefully turned me to face him." It's just the two of them so saying a arm would indicate that there other people or another unknown person with them.

Second spelling error: "it tock a moment but finally she opened those pools of blue and started me straight on. - the word tock should be took. And "started me should read as stared at me straight on."

Typo: your self - should be yourself. This may have been a spacing error.

Your are doing a very nice job with your story and I can't wait to read more chapters, so keep them coming. Great job!


allison (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Jul 2016

I have fallen in love with this story. I am really enjoying this new approach to the Kagome and Sesshomaru dynamic. I can't wait for the next chapter.  


Zeelian (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Jul 2016

Interesting sofar, but needs a proofread.


For instance you are writing "tock" (as in tick-tock, the sound a clock makes) instead of "took", past form of take.


Also it looks very odd with Sesshoumaru saying "Huh".
"Huh" is something thats normally said as a question "Huh?", a way to say you didn't understand or hear what someone said, pretty much a stupid sounding way of saying "What?" usually used to indicate that the person speaking is either extremely distracted or simply a bit slow in the in the head, neither fits Sesshoumaru.
"Hn." would be a more fitting way to express his typical "not answer"
"Feh" or "Keh" would be Inuyashas version, indicating a more impatient personality. 


Jaime (Chapter 4) - Wed 27 Jul 2016

Kagome is gonna become so bad ass. looking foward to were it goes


Desiree Nickels (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Oct 2014

Loved it PLEASE UPDATE?


Darkness living in Hope (Chapter 2) - Thu 20 Mar 2014

Oh nicw chiffie at the ending. Looking forwars to see what happens next


Darkness living in Hope (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Mar 2014

I like, it's different from other fics and has lots of promise of becoming a great story


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 10 Mar 2014

Great chapter, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!


mari (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Mar 2014

so far so good thanks.


Ana (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Mar 2014

I liked it! ^^ 

Thank you for the update! <3


Blossom34 (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Mar 2014

Where u at Dreamer?


I Love The Stuff I Review (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Feb 2014

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!! PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!!


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