Nice chapter, keep it coming.
I'm only in chapter 8 but I'm greatly enjoying this story. I really wanted to write the review after reading chapter 8 though. I like how you used two other characters from Rumiko Takashi in it. Especially since it was Kuno. He has always been my favorite. Although it was somewhat surprising that you used Akane as his wife instead of female Ranma, since he was so obsessed with Him/her.
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 13) - Wed 08 Jan 2014
great chapter. looking forward to what happens next
OMG!!! that is so cool of a story it is keeping me on my toes i can't wait to read more. I so love Sesshomaru!!! as well.
Im really happy of what I read today, I only hope that Rin is ok, and the servant keep her safe,so i faithfuly going to wait for the next chapter.
Another Chapter Please!
tonya (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 Jan 2014
awesome! cant wait for next chapter
Holy crap! This was one intense chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I love this story, I'm glad you posted it on this site, I hope you update it on fanfiction since it's been two years, since you have. Keep it coming, Happy New Year!
tonya (Chapter 11) - Tue 07 Jan 2014
excellent chapter
Wow talk about a freaky looking demon. I kinda thought the part that Jaken got chased around by a HAND was funny! I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru's mother thinks about him taking Inuyasha's place.
angela (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 Jan 2014
what a great story so far. i have enjoyed it immensly since the beginning. Keep up the great work, and as far as your question goes. i would make Rin the same age Kagome told her mother that she was 10 or 11 ish. i dont think its too old, but she still young enough to where it would look like Rin was Kagome's daughter.
Look forward to reading more,
Inulover
Young Rin
tonya (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 Jan 2014
you rock!
lattie (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 Jan 2014
I remembered that story! Grimm tales right? I haven't heard that story in so long. I missed it. ^_^ thumbs up for keeping tiny Rin!
domesticated kagome
Rhonda (Chapter 9) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
This is the first time that I have had a chance to read your FanFiction. And I read it all in one sitting. This story is excellent!!
I love the way this work is in a way a memoir,,,,starting off in the first chapter with Kagome in her own words talking about the growth of her and Sesshoumaru's relationship and then launches into the story.
I smiled,laughed and got teary eyed more than once........ stry telling at it's finest!!
Looking so forward to updates.....Thank You for a great read!
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