something tells me that things are going to get dark for kagome very quickly since she was 'being prepared' for koga and sesshomaru to basically rape her.
frankly i think she should tell them straight off- if you touch me in any sexual manner- you will not get any help from me.
true that they may not like that, but if she refused to help them because they hurt her- then it doesn't really matter. it certainly wouldn't work in their favor.
Raine (Chapter 5) - Fri 26 Feb 2016
Awesome job! I didn't think the story was that choppy. Looking foward to the next chapter.
Haven (Chapter 5) - Sat 09 Jan 2016
I hope you update!
Rocky (Chapter 5) - Sat 09 May 2015
Okay I'm totally in love with this story! You haven't worked on it in so long and I don't know if you ever will again but you should! Honestly loving the concept and all the juicy goodness it could lead to! This is my plea that you start this up again (obviously whenever you are able, y'know since you currently have a very busy life LOL). Hope you're doing well, keep on plugging!
Rocky (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Jan 2015
I need moreeeeeeeeee! So good! Keep on plugging!
Andrea (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Oct 2014
I like it , it is great andi love the fact you made them interact with kouga, this is going to be interesting, but if i may ask, i would like to see kagome getting stronger and standing up to both of them.
Jennie (Chapter 5) - Fri 22 Aug 2014
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YOU NEED TO UPDATE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!
I am loving the story so far, I wish that I could just sit here and read till my eyes bled. But alas, I can not.... because there are only five chapters!!!!!!!!
I love your story. I like your take on an alternate meeting. The part with the attendants was funny. I look forward to enjoying more.
marisel (Chapter 5) - Sat 31 May 2014
this is avery nice story. why dont you finished it. it is old but goody.
marisel (Chapter 5) - Tue 29 Apr 2014
oh come on how long weneed to wait fot the next chapters !!!!!!""
super col??..L
marisel (Chapter 2) - Mon 28 Apr 2014
like it pretty .sad and funny at the same ime. are you going o finishec¿???????
MORE PLEASE!
Kagome's demon glamour crew reminds me of Katniss's prep team in Hunger Games :D
Didn't find this chapter choppy at all! Dialogue and action flowed smoothly to me.
Things are about to get real though, I suspect, now that's she's all prettied up AND reunited with both of her appreciative demon lords... ;)
Looking forward to next time!!
-C
Since this was like, an old story of yours, I'll totally continue to overlook the English style used for the description of culture and architecture. Totally will for you! hahah! Very well done! I'm kind of a fan of anyone banging Kagome, so totally cool legits with Koga getting to hump! Love you! Can't wait for the next installment!
Akita (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jan 2014
MORE PLEASE!!
Love it! Please I need more. Will we find out about kagomes family?
Love it! Please I need more. Will we find out about kagomes family?
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