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rose (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

next chapter please


Master_sword1 (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

I like it it's different


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

I feel like your story has potential but you have a lot of errors and the flow is kind of chopped up. You might want to look into finding a beta to help you out.


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