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Melody Vengeance (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

pardon my language but OMFG you have to update sson I LOVE it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 


Rhonda (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

Beautiful.....  Looking forward to more.


elizabeth (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Dec 2013

nice story but good am confused ISAO IS NAME  OF THE BEAST INTERIOR HAVING SESSHOMARU


Haven (Chapter 4) - Wed 04 Dec 2013

Great story so far.  I particularly appreciate the nice, long chapters!  We haven't heard too much about Kag's remaining family.  What do they think about all the hatred directed at her and if they have the same experience with haters? 


hana sora (Chapter 4) - Wed 04 Dec 2013

Ooo, how sweet XD. . Our little virgin kagome blushing and sessh cuddling her. . Keep it coming


Maura (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Dec 2013

Hello, I like the plot you have going on in your story. However, your story has a few structural and grammatical problems. Some paragraphs have incorrect chronological grammar. Where the subject is something that happened in the past ,but is not a flashback, present tense is being used as if it were a current event. Past happenings should be written in past tense. There are sentences that have repetitive information within the structure. In the third chapter, when Sesshomaru is looking for a place to die quietly, there is a sentence separated by commas that describes what Sesshomaru is doing twice in the same sentence. Thank you for reading my review.


hana sora (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Dec 2013

ooo, nice shoot. . keep it coming! :D


satuross (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Dec 2013

uh. i thought they were under attack... what happened.


inu eyes (Chapter 2) - Sat 30 Nov 2013

I LOVE UR STORY!!! kagome is soooo sweet i just love it and i hope sesshomaru falls head over hills in love with her keep it going ^_^


hana sora (Chapter 2) - Sat 30 Nov 2013

what happened next?? :O


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