Sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Ooooh, a twist. I always love it when Rin grows up and she doesn't remain innocent, something changes in her to make her a little less moral. With all that's happened in her life, the sweetness she shows in the show always surprised me. In that situation, I'd expect a very broken, a very angry, or a very mental little girl. Not Rin.

With my tendancy for over analyzing Rin out of the way, so Sesshomaru is in a very weakened state and is now gone. Is this when he's going to run into Kagome? Good use of the prompt as well.

Thanks for sharing.

Oooh, I'm very curious to see how this plays out. I was slightly confused by who was talking and what was going on but perhaps future installments shall make me understand a little better.

Thanks for sharing. Karma as well for new story.