UnknownRandomness (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Oct 2013

I am enjoying this so far- it shows promise. I like your light, humorous tone and the degrading description of the 'whores', it made me giggle.

Another good point was ensuring that we haven't met Kagome yet- the suspense of his reaction to her and vice versa will definitely keep me reading this story. 

Looking forward to the next chapter! :) 

inu eyes (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Oct 2013

I LOVE IT this story feels like its going 2 be good keep going

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Oct 2013

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

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