This is quite an interesting story. I loved how you brought different mytholohies. I almost didnt catch the representation of the Mother, Maiden and Crone and had to do a double take. 

Anyway, very nice and I can't wait to read more. 

Blessed Be 

)0(~Wicked 

Good story.  Some things were out of whack due to inexperience I presume, but not bad.  the stuff that was like sandpaper to my mind I just skated over and continued reading.  :)

I am looking forward to reading what comes next.  

Enjoyed this chapter looking forward to next.

I always love the blending of youkai and reki.  Lovely balance of nature..

Awesome story so far. Can't  wait for next update.

I cannot wait for your next chapter! I haven't stopped reading this story since I found it on my nookbook! Boy, am I lucky or what! Love it, loveit, love it! Especially the Smexy Sessy Stretch!!! It had my fingers itching to push Kagome out of the way and pounce on him myself! What a lucky girl!

Looking forward. To the battle.

I am glad that you are back and continuing with your story. The chapter was short but nice nonetheless. Update soon!

So glad to see you continuing this story!

I can't wait to see what happens next between Seshy and Kags!

Stumbbled upon your story and I love it. I love after anime/manga stories and I love yours 29 chapters in 3 hours later I am needing more!!!!!

What an interesting and intriguing story! I hope to read more very soon!!!

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed it you can watch them on youtube. Great chapters, keep it coming

All that, and I keep getting hits of Shakespeare as well.  MacBeth in this chapter.

I noticed baby InuYasha's sharp little fangs in the anime, and I thought "Youch!"

I love stories that portray Shippo as viewing Kagome as his mother figure. 

I can see you are following that oh-so-sound bit of writing advice... don't tell the story, let the words and actions of the characters tell the story.  Even though this story, at first glance, appears to be in the style of a journal, written from Kagome's point of view, down deep it's a lot more like a play.  Looking at this chapter with this in mind, I realize that, through a very few words, spoken by Miroku himself, you reveal the side of Miroku that serves as the voice of common sense, reason, and speaker of truth.  In both canon and fanon, this side of Miroku's character is almost always overshadowed by the broad brushstrokes of the humorous "lecherous monk" persona.  As I read each chapter, after the first chapter and leading up to this one, you had me wondering how Kagome would become the pariah we see portrayed in the first chapter.  Even though we haven't yet seen the malign influence of the villager you created in this chapter come to full fruition, the seed is well planted.  This bearer of malice and mischief is every inch an archetypal character...  As are Kagome, and Miroku, and all the other villagers.  I'm thinking you, the author, are spinning out an InuYasha version of the Salem Witch Trials in this story.  Clever, clever!  I'm really loving this!   

Oh, my gosh!  I was anticipating what would happen when InuYasha finally decided to show up, knowing something interesting was bound to happen, and boy, did it!  I liked InuYasha's initial reaction to the new baby.  Then, bang!  You really took me by surprise.  Nice writing!

I like your style!  Also, the technical aspects of your writing are well tended-to.  So many interesting stories suffer from lack of editing, lack of attention to detail.  I appreciate it when I find an author who tells an interesting story, and who respects her readers enough to take care of the technical side of things.  Great work!

Great first chapter!  You have really caught my interest.  Your writing style is very engaging!

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