| This has to be one of the most interesting and intriguing fics I read in quite a while. I just love it. I don't think I've ever even heard of a storyline like this and poor Kagome is stuck in the middle because she is just so sweet, kind, loving, and giving. She'd die first before abandoning a person, be it child or adult, that's in great need. I like the flow and I'm even enjoying the first person prospective, added with the present tense of writing. You are doing a wonderful job and I have got A LOT of fics to catch up on and here I am adding another. Your summary just drew me in. Dang, I'm just too curious.   JEN    
 |  More, keep it coming.     
 | Such chaos, but luckily they both founded the strength and power to cleanse the land. Kagome must be very fatigued to have fallen into unconsciousness like that.    
 
rose (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Oct 2013 | next chapter please    
 | so instead of purifying darkness, they activated a nuke which turns the village into flowers? darn.    
 | I have just finished reading all the chapters back to back and I really enjoyed the story. I must say that I am impressed with your ability of writing in the first person very adequately. Keep up the great writing! And please do enjoy your vacation! lol!    
 | now im confused....may choji... darn i need to re-read? rats.    
 |  Nice, keep it coming.      
 | Keep it coming.    
 
rose (Chapter 14) - Fri 04 Oct 2013 | next chapter please    
 | hehe thanks for the update.  we still dont know who is the bad guy.   is it generic inu guard A?    
 | Liking all, keep it coming.     
 
rose (Chapter 13) - Thu 03 Oct 2013 | next chapter please    
 | aww rats. this is all jibberish to me T_T    
 
rose (Chapter 12) - Thu 03 Oct 2013 | next chapter please    
 | awwww. is the angst already over? will there be only fluff left? :(    
 
rose (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2013 | next chapter please    
 | Poor poor generic inu youkai A :D they get beat up by the main girl protagonist, and now they will get beat up by the main guy protagonist.   Oh dont get me wrong. i love beating up generic characters.    
 | More, keep it coming.    
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