I have been a naughty girl and not reviewing as much as I should.  I adore stories that are dark and have serious angst issues.  Your story is well written, suspenseful, and so very poignant.  I check every Sunday like clockwork, because I can't wait to see what happens next.  Well done!

SS

I have been a naughty girl and not reviewing as much as I should.  I adore stories that are dark and deal have serious angst issues.  Your story is well written, suspenseful, and so very poignant.  I check every Sunday like clockwork, because I can't wait to see what happens next.  Well done!

SS

Noooo He had Miroku killed and has Sango being tourtered!!!! (dont know how to spell that) Good gor you Kagome slap him hard!!!

forginevess for what happened to sesshomaru

next chapter please

sorta forgive him .. her twins are alive after all

no forgiveness for sesshoumaru.

Fan fiction is not easy to write, your characbacks already have a backstory.  You can knead that backstory, stretch it, even remake it like a strawberry pie to a strawberry rhubarb pie but never to a chocolate cake.  Starting a story with a rape scene seems to decrease your character and story line potential  an awfully lot. Even if your story has as  prequel or post script the central story should stand alone and  of those devices should only explain what you could not in the story arc.

I like how Sesshomaru's character in this story is that of a principled sociopath... His actions are vile but they all fall under certain principles... like how his vile actions are ''alright'' as long as they stick to these rules....

How will Kagome ever reconcile herself to her situation? Will she or not? If she did, I ask if any female must ever settle for such a thing? Is motherhood good enough for any woman to forget her dignity, pride, freedom etc.?  These are the questions I hope to find in your later chapters:)

the story is very very interesting... I hope to follow through to your journey''s end in this...

What r these TVC series ur acc only shows one story SP n I would really want sessh to get some taste of his medicine. He Shuld understand u can't always take sometimes u have ask and work for it

What r these TVC series ur acc only shows one story SP n I would really want sessh to get some taste of his medicine. He Shuld understand u can't always take sometimes u have ask and work for it

next chapter please

WOW!!!! I love your fic, it got me from the very beginning...keep up the GREAT work!!!!! and please update soon.....

Oh, poor miroku. . :(

but still i like your story. .

keep it coming!

Must say I very much enjoy your story.  I am a strong believer in karma, what comes around goes around...  I truly loathe sesshomaru in this story... dont get me wrong I like the instinct driven mating possessiveness thing but there is a fine line that should not be crossed and he is walking all over it.  I hope and pray that Kagome snaps and gets crazy powerful to put him in his place.   I need him to feel her pain, suffering and her unquenchable wrath for his wrongs...and most importantly HE NEEDS TO TAKE RESPONSIBILITY AND STOP BLAMING OTHERS FOR HIS POOR CHOICES. (Huge personal pet peeve for anyone fictional or non) your story makes me feel as though I experiencing how helpless, victimized, and angry as kagome.   And now all I want is for kagome to find a strength inside of her that will bring sesshomaru and his captain to their knees so they understand that just because they (her & sango) are human women that doesn't make them inferior to them.  Please dont make kagome suffer anymore I dont think I can stomach it... help her settle the score.. its not often that a story moves me to leave a review and I hope you dont take any of my comments as criticism or suggestions on how to write your story I love it as it is. I just wanted to thank you and share how much your story insited my ire.  :)  thank you for taking the time to share your story.  

WHAT?!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Killing off Miroku? So not cool. Katsutoshi needs to be dealt with and if he thinks Sango is going to stand for working his brothel, he's crazy. Sango needs to fight as much as possible. And Sesshomaru needs to learn that secrets have a way of coming out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

You are so wrong Sesshomaru, keep it coming.

Im freaking hating Sesshy right now!!!!

Oh, poor Miroku.  What a horrible end for him.  I dread for Sango as well.  Nice chapter, albeit sad.  :(