Poor Kagome.
But I wonder if Sesshomaru realizes his precarious position?
He wants her to feel betrayed and depend and rely only on him. Yet wouldn't too much betrayl and angst darken her light? Make her wish to give up and just rest from all the hurt and pain? And what about when she finds out he not only lied about the reason he did not save Onigumo but he also instigated Onigumo's death which also caused her injury? Too much death and betrayl make break her spirit and then what would he do?
Really enjoying this story, please update again soon!
P.S. Hope you win!
Yay! Another chapter! Keep them coming! I love this story
Ana (Chapter 19) - Sun 29 Jun 2014
So you decided to update? *-* god i love you xD
it' good to see that sess is trying to gain a heart :3
thank you fot the update <3
Margie (Chapter 19) - Sun 29 Jun 2014
So happy you updated! Looking forward to another chapter!!
I can't wait for kagome to finally be corrupted. I hope it's going to eventually be a long chapter of debauchery...
Loren (Chapter 18) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Loved it.. please continue!!
Your best story by far.
Kiyah, omg! Im loving how the plot thickens!!!! Love this; love YOU; love, love, love!!!
Ana (Chapter 18) - Fri 04 Apr 2014
So FINALLY i manage to read this fic :3 and as usual i loved it! :D
Nice work darling!!!! Really nice work! <3
Koree (Chapter 18) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
Great Story :)
uh ho......wonder if Kikyo was with Inu? If that's the case then another piece of Kagome's innocent heart may break. But I think Kagome's inner strength will prevail and she will prove to Sesshomaru she is not going to truly became dark.
I would love to see how Onigumo turns Naraku - I'm hoping that's the way you're going? Can't wait for more!
yayyy. drama hehehehe
maybe they will find them copulating in a cave with inuyasha
Koi (Chapter 17) - Wed 19 Feb 2014
Sooo good! I can't wait until the next chapter!
Great chapters, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
I wonder if Sesshomaru will see who Kagome really is before he ends up destroying something worthwhile in a land full of evil.....wonder if Kagome will forgive Sesshomaru for assisting in the murdering of Onigumo.....sooooo many questions!~!!!!!
Love this plot you got going. Will you let Shippo, Miroku, and Sango enter into the picture too?
keep it coming!
what a tease. gosh kagome.
I feel bad for Onigumo...then again I am biased and I have a thing for villians. Naraku is a fave. There is just something heartbreaking about a villian's past that twists them so hard, you can do nothing but pity them. Inversely, the hero usually has a damaging past but they aren't so far broken that they can't move from it, thus working harder to make life better, maybe not for themselves, but others.
Ex: Loki> major fan girls.
I loved the last couple chapters and Kagome's interations with each of the characters. I love the development. A part of me wishes for Onigumo to make that jump to Naraku to make Sesshoumaru's life more complicated, but I will be happy with wherever this goes.
Thank you for another great chapter!!!
Now he should know he was taking advantage of her in an emotional state!
Poor girl, i wonder where her sister is though
I cant wait until Kagome finds out that Sesshomaru led the villagers to Onigumo
Update soon please!
Koi (Chapter 16) - Tue 11 Feb 2014
OMG I'm in love with this chapter! What a tease! Lol. This was getting sooooooo goood! im glad Sesshy has self control because that could have ended messy. Lol I hope that Sesshy gets rid of the thought of turning her into something he's not you know? Kag and Sesshy could have a long lasting relationship if he just let go of the idea of currupting her. Lol GREAT JOB with this wonderful story I can't wait for the next update!!!
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