it's a great job! the emotions are really well written. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Will they see each other again soon? please update as soon as you can!!

it's a great job! the emotions are really well written. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Will they see each other again soon? please update as soon as you can!!

Wow, really emotional! You got them across really well. Sess is a jerk! Poor Kagome...

I just cried my eyes out reading this chapter. I can understand it was hard to write, as it was very hard to read... not hard like -bad- hard, per se, but emotionally hard. It's just as if you had ripped your own heart out and offered it to us on a platter. I like how you play with words, and even if I'm not usually one for angst (and your story is full of it), I enjoyed reading. And I know I would enjoy more of it, if you would please gift us with some more. I hope, some day, she can find peace in his arms. Dewa mata

dear god akumi that was wonderful an ultra sad. I'm so glad you ocntinued.

This was a wonderful and heart rending chapter. Werll done. I have to admit I wept reading it, remembering my own miscarriages and the heart break, the questions and self blame involved. You did a wonderful job on it. Please update soon!

Akumi, oh my goodness, this story is wonderful, you have such a way with words. as soon as nominations are open agian i am gonna nominate this story for something, i am not sure yet for what catagory i will nominate it for but it will be nominated

Having had two difficult but successful, pregnancies, I can't personally relate to the utter pain and desolation portrayed in this chapter. Through your words, though, I can FEEL it... and again thank whatever higher power exists that I did not go through something similar. This was powerful, moving, and achingly tragic - such an excellent bit of writing!! Congratulations, and I look forward eagerly to whatever comes next. :-) ~~Wiccan~~

Great job, hope you plan on getting out a third chapter some time soon or your readers my band together and make you :P

I love it. The last few paragraphs got to me. I cried. Keep it going sweets.

Great job, hope you plan on getting out a third chapter some time soon or your readers my band together and make you :P

I am very impressed my the quality of your work. You are very good at bringing the reader into the emotions of the characters. I can see how it would have been overwhelming to write at times. I hope you can give us a third chapter soon.

You really got your message across. I'm crying my eyes out. I may not have had my niece but I was there for all of my sister's pregnancy, I was there when she was born, and watched and cared for her the first 3 months of her life. This really hit me hard because I couldn't imagine my life without my niece. Really emotion and morbidly spendid. Excellently written. I hope you continue.

I juse loved this chapter. can't wait to find out what happens next

o my god if u don't continue this... i swear something bad will happen

I got that 'sad' burning in my chest more than once while reading this. Wow. I'd love to see more.

Very nicely done. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. As I mentioned in chat, watch the description flow and the size of a couple of paragraphs. Other than that it was very well done.

i think we need a follow up chapter.

I loved this. You better update it soon!

I really loved it! You should seriously continue!!