Please post your other stories to your FF.net account! They look so good, but I don't have an account! ;_;
By the way,I love your style. The way you began slow and teasing was great, and I could really feel Kagome's sorrow. It wasn't to dramatic weeping stuff some people write, and I loved that! You made her sorrow more realistic to me and things were subtle, not enormous changes in character, awareness, plot, etc. You wove this tale carefully and wonderfully so far, please continue! :D
Keep it coming.
xDori (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2013
Omggg update soon! Great first chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!
Loving this story already, it's interesting. Keep it coming.
I look forward to reading more of this fascinating story. It is very well written and engaging.
mari (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2013
sad but i liked it thanks.
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