Reviews for City of Flames by LM Bluejay

Aubrey Simone (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Aug 2013

Gah, sorry for the late response! As for this chapter, I don't have much to say (probably because this was awesome and there are no words) but I liked the way you used the theme. I love how unrepentently bad ass Kagome is (which I think I already said) and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

~Aubrey


Stella Mira (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Aug 2013

Naughty, naughty Kagome. Uh, excuse me, Kagome and the kid! Bahahahaha!! They got their butts kicked by a brat. Hilarious!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 05 Aug 2013

Keep it coming.


xDori (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Aug 2013

Omigoshhhh, a badass mofo Kagome? I love it :)


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Jul 2013

Oooh interesting! I personally loved the dialogue, and I absolutely adore a bad ass Kagome, so kudos for that! I can't wait to see where you go with this (it's definitely going to be extremely difficult to tie all of the prompts together).

Anyway, I enjoyed the sort of dystopian/slightly futuristic feel of this, and I hope you explore the sci-fi aspect of it a bit more, because sci-fi is awesome and more people should write it lol. Also, this flowed fairly well, and the only thing I felt was out of place was Kagura and Sesshomaru's little intimate moment - I know that you wanted to give us readers a hint of a past/ongoing relationship between them, but I think the delivery was a bit too direct and it interrupted the dynamic I had been getting from them up until that point.

Other than that little hiccup, though, I think that this was very well written, and I can't wait to see how you incorporate your next prompt!

~Aubrey

p.s. - that line, the one where Sesshomaru calls Inuyasha a "known tempramental twit"? that was awesome lol


Stella Mira (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2013

Bahahahahahaha! HA! How in the name of Hades did Inuyasha ever managed to become a detective is beyond me at this point, but oh-so-amusing!!! I like the portrayals so far - especially Kagome's! I do like this new world you have created - so exciting! I've been waiting for the story which accompanied that fanart and I was not disappointed! Excellent start!

ONWARDS!

P.S. Wonderful job on the prompt, too!


Nini (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2013

Ooooo interesting! I'm curious to see how this story's gunna ccontinue

update soon :)


Seraphina Dragon (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2013

please keep updating

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jul 2013

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jul 2013

i really like it thanks.


Wunderberry (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jul 2013

Aren't all things hard in life? Eh, whatever, though I wasn't paying attention to how you used the theme, you can definitely hook a reader in and keep them 'til the end. Good job!


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