Great chapter as per usual, with just enough steamy action to keep the tension from dragging too long, but enough plot to keep it interesting. The only problem I can see is the random injection of a Japanese sentence towards the end. It's not a phrase with no direct translation, so it really only serves to hinder the flow in the time it takes to pause, scroll down to read the translation, then scroll back up and find one's place again.
Wow poor Kagome, she seems so confused and believes she's betraying Inuyasha.
But hopefully soon she will see that the changes going on are good and will submit to Sesshomaru. I'm unsure how she'd be able to forgive Sesshomaru if he felt that he had to destroy the well in order to keep her in his era. She may feel like the only way to get away from him is to run away from everyone (which would be foolish).
I'm kind of befuddled though. Sesshomaru has repeadetly said that she can never run away from him - does this mean he can find her through the bond wherever and whenver she is? But if that's true, can she do the same?
Why doesn't Kikyo notice the scent marking like Sango does? I'm sure if Sango could notice it, so could Kikyo and why doesn't Narku see Sesshomaru trying to win Kagome? He's got Kanna and her mirror plus the hell bee's that he uses to spy. So I wonder why he hasn't noticed before.......
Can't wait to read more!
Alii (Chapter 6) - Thu 05 Sep 2013
Oh snap I love their make out session all hot and heavy. Please update soon! I can not wait for the crap to hit the fan!
This is getting so interesting...I just can't! It's too good!!!
Update soon!!
So freaking awesome. Though shhh My group thinks I am off writing chapters for my stories... You are as awesome as always!
Love how Sesshoumaru is falling for her, and she doing the same. Though it is odd to read this listening to All In, it helps clarify the chapter! hehehe
Are we missing a chapter?
i love this so much!!!!!
update!!!!
s_spina (Chapter 5) - Mon 19 Aug 2013
Amber, I love you!
About a month ago I wrote on the forum a request for this type of story but the aren't many :DD and now you come up with one!!!!
I would just love to hug you soo much!
The story is amazing, and the tension (oh my!)
love it! love it! love it!
Britney (Chapter 5) - Sat 17 Aug 2013
oh my super amazing cnt wait for more
That’s fine, we like chapters and just mentioning us makes us happy! I figured you took most of it from the manga, it looked really familiar, haha. I can’t wait to see what happens next because I love this story!
Kula (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
Love this new fic, can't wait for the next chapter.
At first, I was not sure about the style, but you have managed to make it work while using the manga as a template. :D
rose (Chapter 5) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
next chapter please
Uh ho.....An angry Sesshomaru is nothing to sneeze at!
Hmmm, wonder if he will still revive the panther tribe in the end? Probably, to at least show Kagome he would indulge her lol....
Wonder if this will be the state of Inuyasha realizing something is going on with Kagome and Sesshomaru. He's still pretty wrapped up with his dead miko though......soooo interesting!
Also, wouldn't Shippo know what the courting mark is? or maybe he's too young to know....Cannot wait to see how he gets Bakusaiga now!!!!!!
~~Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
More, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 5) - Tue 13 Aug 2013
loved the update thanks.
Ankita (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Aug 2013
Interesting chapter really curious about the next one do update soon please
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