Reviews for Autumn by Evellin

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Blommie8 (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 May 2015
Naraku show up. Whose the naraku playmate?

No Uta (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 May 2015

I can't tell you how thrilled I was to receive a notification that you'd updated. I am a fan of fics with immensely dark content. The darker the better. This is one tale I cannot get enough of. So much has been revealed in this one chapter. It answered many of the questions that lingered in my mind. You're portrayal of Naraku is deliciously devilish. He is superbly sadistic and I love it. It appears he has struck a deal in order to obtain Kagome. I'm very curious to see how his plan will all unravel itself. I fancied the intervention of the kami, Autumn herself. One can only hope the prideful daiyokai lord has come to understand the meaning behind, "learn". A phenomenal update and well worth the wait. 


satuross (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 May 2015

woww.. love this new chapter. seems the story is moving now.

 

Cant wait for more angst and dark. i wanna see seshhy suffer for 80 chapters. Btw. where is Rin. haha


vhfluffy (Chapter 15) - Thu 30 Apr 2015

O wow! You've really done a fantabulous job with this update! I love it!

I took a break from juicy Sesshy fanfics n what a way to get back into it with this update. Keep 'em coming; update soon please! 

With that out of the way, I love how the relationship between the two of them is starting to turn towards toleration? She's already decided to stay with him and he gave his word to not harm her friends, so why not at least be civil. I like that, it has great potential for them to even like and love each other. Such a tease seeing somehwat playful side from him, I love it all! Should she tell him about the well? That's a tough one. That knowledge is the only thing she has left that he hasn't taken from her. Should she part with it n let him control even her past? I think she should play it off as nothing, she can't lie to him, he will know. So she should just evade the subject. He is too perceptive, so not sure how you will tackle that one. 

 

 

Absolutely loved the scene with them returning to his shiro. Such a beautifully painted picture you've described. I could feel the emotions and got goosebumps while reading it. How can she feel such desire for someone she absolutely hates?! That's the part that keeps me so fascinated. I've loved this story from the very beginning, n this is one of  my all time favorites!

 

Update soon, I can't wait!

 

 

 


Elizabeth (Chapter 15) - Sat 04 Apr 2015

Loved it !!! Please update soon!!!

 


Faye Valentine (Chapter 15) - Fri 03 Apr 2015

Please update soon, I love your story!!! (:


lala (Chapter 15) - Sat 28 Mar 2015

update please!


lala (Chapter 5) - Mon 23 Mar 2015

awesome so far


No Uta (Chapter 15) - Mon 23 Mar 2015

Incredible chapter! Just as you said in your notes, there was a lot going on. Sesshomaru is a sly dog haha. I couldn't help but to chuckle at his manipulation of her. He's not too terrible after all. He had no intentions of harming her companions. He watched over her, Sango and Shippo while they bathed in the hot springs. I fancied how he subtly teases her and let's her know that he enjoyed the view, in his own way. He is one wise ole Inu. The scene where he bit her was magical. Now that she's off the high that his bite gave her, her spirit appears broken. I'm curious to see what else develops, now that he has managed to get her to forge an agreement never to leave his side. I have always favoured  darker fiction. This story is right up my alley. I myself write dark,  tragic fiction, full of angst. It is always a pleasure to read the work of others that share the same interests. Phenomenally written. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Sat 21 Mar 2015

So good, keep it coming.


snow (Chapter 15) - Sat 21 Mar 2015

i hate sesshomaru. this story has invoked such hatread for the male. i hate rapest i hate people who force their will apon anyone. she should just dump down and go home he cant go to the future and she will be safe inuyasha is the only one who can go back and forth. inuyasha can lie hiding his sent if possible saying she is the only one who can pass so her friends will be safe or just say he can go but if she is angered she can seal the well something so sesshomaru will have to not be forceful. damn i normally love the pairing but the whole way he is doing things i hate him for it. the rape his forceful ways he is an abusive male once abusive always abusive. sorry but people who abuse others dont change they will always hit always put down always that is how they are. seeing a doctor meetings ect doesnt work ive seen it they never change, im sorry i didnt mean to hit you, i wont do it again i love you, please forgive me i was just mad it will never happen again. bullshit it always does. my mother was abused by her boyfriend for years he raped her beat her and would say sorry and she forgave him made her bleed all over one of my memories was the bathroom sink mirror covered in blood i was only a baby 4 years old maybe but i remember it all. but woman in abusive relationships always forgive the bastards. idk if it was seeing my mother like that which made me how i am a fighter. kagome is a fighter i hope she fights him all the way and he changes and trys to win her heart the right way.


hana sora (Chapter 15) - Fri 20 Mar 2015

Please update as soon as you can, no more words can describing the story! Totally love it.


barb (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Mar 2015

I hope she doesnt tell him. No sesshy no. You dont get everything you want. Cant manipulate or force this one!

 He already promised not to hurt her friends. Its not as if he can threaten to destroy the well....thats already done.

 

Guess he could get sneaky and have others hurt her friends but he wouldnt be that dishonerable would he? I mean come on....thats leaning more towards naraku style.


loraine mae (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Mar 2015

still waiting for the part where seshomaru begs forgiveness... great story...


Eva (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Mar 2015

Poor Kagome. Her heart is going to give out from all the emotional mood swings. It seems that he no longer feels confident that he is completely capable of keeping her by force, thus the manipulation. I love the description and imagery used to make the trip back an almost surreal experience. The revelation that there could be something more than eternal strife between them is breath taking. Ah but then comes the bucket of ice water. I can almost imagine her heartbreak turning to guilt and panic, like a kid caught in a lie, at having to explain the well... and he is waiting. 

Thanks as always for sharing. I look forward to seeing where this is headed


riran (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Mar 2015

Whoa.... you know how frustrating is to wait the next chapter, but it is worth to wait. Great chapter :D

 


Koi (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Mar 2015

OMG!!! WHAT AN UPDATE!!! This chapter was soooo goood! You did an amazing job with this chapter! I can't wait until the next chapter... i mean of course Kag is going to tell our lovely Sesshy about the future...right? I mean he has the right to know, since they are mated. lol I can't wait to for the next chapter!


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Mar 2015
I've been waiting for a long time to review your story. I hope you can regulary update. Good story. I hope kagome can forgive him in the end. I hope she's pregnant to.

satuross (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Mar 2015

aw cum on kagome, its time to fight back :D


barb (Chapter 14) - Mon 16 Mar 2015

Btw keep up the awesome work!


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