Where do you get inspiration from? The story flow is not seminal, but the way you compose them is golden!

Loved this; the lust between the two and the conflict within are palpable. and your writing -- sheer poetry. Don't stop writing.

Fantastic imagery! You have a gift for weaving in a poetic element that takes the rawness out of the rough and tumble scenario you've painted (at least, in my opinion). Iriled it. Thanks for sharing!

Once again amazing.. I love it, all of it! I am sad this is the last one but it is perfect!(:

This story was amazing and I enjoyed.

i do not understand whats happening...im sorry...my english sux and its my third language

Keep it coming

I like this a lot. I really like your use of color to describe the feeling in each chapter. 

This is so completly dark, sinful, and lusty. I love how you have worded this. Its a beautiful depiction of something typically not that lovely. Again, great job!

Sinful. That is the only thing that comes to mind. I enjoy these snipets. You're a talented writer.

Yep. This is sweltering. I really enjoy how you describe their joining. Its romantic and still so sinful. Awesome!

So stinkin hot. I love this. It has a great longing and tortured vibe to it. So great! Have I told you how much I enjoy your writting style?

I love your writting style. I especially love how sensual this felt without actually mentioning much. Great chapter. :)

More, keep it coming.

I am really enjoying your poetry. I love the erotic flavour of each color. The story is beautiful, dark and sensual. Great writing!

Loving it, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Well damn the discription of these colors are so vivid. Please update soon!(;

I love the way in which you write and tell a story, it is beautiful and it flows so smoothly, and this story is so sensual yet dark. I like it very much! 

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.