i need more!!!!

I am soooo in love with this story!! Please update soon. You're author's notes are killing me!! So funny:) Thank you for writing this. Give Inari a big hug for me

Wait a moment. So what just happened between chapter one and two? Doesn't make sense. Is that when they created a group? Or is that how you have your story written and I would have to read more to understand it? Well, besides that you only had two or three mistakes; as of which I would only feel it apropriate if I send you a message via from my computer not phone. Its just weird with my phone. Anyway..... Though I wonder about chapter two and if you would have written the whole battle.... Though I understand the end of it and the snippets for inbetween. 

Oh, I'm just dying to know what's going to happen next when Sesshomaru confronts her.  It makes sense that they both would see it differently though I have no clue how you manage to resolve their communication problems.  

On the beta note- since you are such a nice beta to me and are willing to put up with my crazy updates, I decided that I'll do the same for you if no one has offered yet.  Send me a PM or e-mail if you're interested.  

oh my god yessss!  there aren't a lot of fanfics where sesshoumaru is protrayed as he was in here..  he can be emotional and kind, but he is ruthless to anyone, even those he loves/cares for/protects.  i cannot wait for the rest of this. or see sesshoumaru's reaction to kagome and her future insubordination (because it WILL happen)   its amazing and i can't wait for the rest.

I was not expecting that reaction from Sess, not at all! xD 

Thanks for the update! <3 

Nice, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter and Happy Mother's Day!

This story is amaizing! The plot really intresting and the caracters, well developed! Nice work! :D 

Thank you for sharing with us! <3

Please update soon! I love your writing style and characters. I could kick you for refering me to ToWriteLoveOnAPage's story though. I absolutly ADORE her work too and she left me with a major cliffhanger. This is why I try to read only finished fanfiction;) I'm just messing around though. I love you!

HI. LIKE THE FANFIC SO FAR ....................HOPE YOU UPDATE WITH LOTS MORE NEW CHAPTETS REALLY .....SOON......................................TDANIEL

So late but great chapter, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

it gets more mysterious with each chapter you put out.  I can't wait to see if Meku is somehow part of the plot against the Western lands.  This is wonderful so far.  Yay to you

I am really enjoying this story. I hope Kikyo does things that redeems herself in everyone's eyes.  I am sorry, I am not a lover of her and I think she should repent... forever.  I can't wait to see if Kagome tells anyone about her dream of seeing the kids.  Hope you update soon

Great chapter, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

hope to read more soon

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Nice story so far. You develop the narrative quite well and have a vocabulary wide enough for the lines not seem repetitive. The personages are in character and the plot isn't by far one of the most unlikely out there. Apart from one or other mistake grammar and spelling are fine as well. Good job for a first try. 

This chapter has me very interested in your story. I'll keep a lookout for new chapters to come. Many blessings and keep on writing!

I read your story and I like the whole argumentative thing going on between Kag and Sess, don't know why she is with him yet, so I will wait for the updates to see how the story progress!