I like it a lot this is so cant stop reading good keep it up.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

next chapter please

Great chapters, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

Please say you are going to do more charpters on this because i find it every good reading. I want to read more of this cant wait for updates on it.

I like your story really much please keep writing :)

Loving all three chapters, keep it coming.

Great story! I love it so far and can't waor for more.  As for changing pov's as long as you make it clear who's pov you are writing from its fine to change back and forth just put who's pov you are writing from. I.e. Kags pov, inu pov...etc. but keep writing its good.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

good plot so far. But I recommend proof reading and making sure you are using the correct words. For an example. I am not sure if you mean 'doe' as in a female deer. Or 'dough' like in bread. But overall it sounds like it will be a good story to keep tabs on and read how it progresses. 

I think you should continue. It's great so far. I would like to know what's going to happen next. I do hope you update soon. ^_^

This certainly has potential to be a good story, the plot is interesting. The idea of mating into the family as the only way to adopt is different and fresh. My only suggestion is to pick a single characters point of view or go with a more omnipotent voice as multiple character POVs can get confusing and disrupt the flow of the story. 

Happy Writing!

Aw poor Kagome.