Loving both chapters, keep it coming.
More, keep it coming.
Loving all three chapters, keep it coming.
Phyllis (Chapter 49) - Sat 13 Jul 2013
Ah, sex-induced writer's block. There are worse problems to have, lol. Nice updates!
Phyllis (Chapter 46) - Sat 13 Jul 2013
Wow, those are some stiff rules. HA! See what I did there? ;)
Phyllis (Chapter 42) - Sat 13 Jul 2013
Reciprocity is the key, 'Gome!! :)
Phyllis (Chapter 38) - Sat 13 Jul 2013
Bad timing, Kagome! This is getting good!
Phyllis (Chapter 35) - Sat 13 Jul 2013
He's trying so hard to resist!
Awww!!! I just love their small moments together.
Especially Sesshy's persona. Now he's a sly one! ;)
Sesshy, thank you for having amazing patience and fortitude:)
Kagome, don't screw this up! Lololol
More! More! :3
All fourteen chapters are great, keep it coming.
I really admire how you sped their sexual advances up and then smoothly slowed them down.
That's some nice writing you got going there Knight.
I really can't wait to see where you take their relationship next! :)
Oh! And here's a prompt: Toxic.
Why can't there be more guys like this in the world! Lol
Why!?!?
I think Sesh might have raised the bar for first time partners. :)
Oh no! Kagome! Since when were you such a vixen!!! XD
YES!!! She should have had him call her 'Master'! Lolol
Hah! She ran like a rabbit and the dog's totally gonna give chase! XD
First sentence is missing an 'of' but other than that this chapter is perfect. :)
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