You need to write more. Much much much more. Chapter 16 made me cry, it's very hard for stories to push me to tears... and well, you've gone and done it. As I have said before, your way of telling a story is a wonderful thing. Please keep telling them.
As I was going through my favorite stories (so I could save them to re-read whenever the mood strikes), I came across this excellent tale again... and was again enthralled for the entire 18 chapters. I sooooooo love your writing - and your descriptions - and your plot twists and turns - and... and... everything! Yes, I re-read this on Valentine's Day, and it fit perfectly with the tone of the day, if you ask me. The redemption of all concerned, even with the angst of losing Kaede, along with the revelation of Sesshoumaru's devotion during Kagome's childhood just fit today. I don't remember if I reviewed this story before but, if not, I want to take this chance to thank you so very much for a WONDERFUL read!!! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
Samantha (Chapter 18) - Fri 10 Oct 2008
| WOW! This story was very good and the part with Miroku and Sango brought me to tears even though I skimmed a little (sorry!). You are a really great writer and you are awesome!
Yuzuki (Chapter 18) - Fri 10 Oct 2008
| This story was breathtakingly beautiful. I loved every moment of it. Your stories always bring me to tears.
| wow, this was a good story. i stayed up until two in the morning reading this. it really had me involved... i couldn't get away from it. You did a wonderful job with this story.
Akumi (Chapter 7) - Tue 07 Oct 2008
| My god...I have been crying for the past hour because of you! And I'm only on chapter seven!!!! Awesome story! it has given me inspiration. ^.^
Akumi (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Oct 2008
| Ohmy goodness girly. I only finished chapter one...but it is amazing already. You are very talented, so very talented! I am shocked with how wonderful this is. I haven't read a story this well done in a long time. I love it, I honestly do. You will get more reviews from me, that I can promise. Simply amazing.
| i don't know why you don't have more reviews, this story was so good, you made my day
Kristi (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| I love your story. It's original, and enjoyable. It is, however, a little difficult to follow. I would recommend using symbols(@@@, ***) or something of the like to separate scenes. In chapter four, you jump right from Izayoi dying in front of Sesshoumar and Shippo, to her master clenching his fist. You haven't given a name to the master yet, so you call him "He." Without the scene break, one reads continuously, and is made to believe that it is Sesshoumaru speaking and clenching his fist. The scene breakers, changers, whatever would make the story so much more easier to read, and much more enjoyable. It's so terribly hard to truly enjoy a story when you have to re-read something because the way it flows makes absolutely no sense.
Just some constructive criticism thrown your way. I really am enjoying the story, otherwise. :D
mimi g (Chapter 16) - Sat 13 Sep 2008
| Can I say is wow !!This story is decribe so well and I love it. I'm glad you updated I was wondering about this story for a while. Keep updating THANKS
| Oh, my goodness!!! Warm fuzzies all the way!! This latest chapter was just... WOW... glorious! Achingly, hauntingly BEAUTIFUL. Thank you so much for posting it here and for continuing this incredibly delicious story!!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
Demonic kunoichiKagi (Chapter 4) - Mon 08 Sep 2008
| This is good.
Is the people Inuyasha, Sango and Miroku or something.
Update
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