Great chapter, I like how Sesshoumaru acted throughout the chapter. The story and the reasoning given by the NOrthern Lords retainer was a very nice touch.

Wispr

Again great work on capturing the emotional tension between those two and can't wait to see how he reacts when Kagome tell's him on what she has decided.

Wispr

OH bloody hell another male thrown into the pot... love how you are writing the mounting pressure between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. The scene with Kagome staring off into space for over 20 minutes was so in character for her!

Wispr

Hehehe. Just a short review. I love the fic and I seriously hope you win the contest. There are a lot of good fics out there but for me, this takes the cake. Cha!

Bloody cute... love how feelings are coming to the fore... wonderful writing!

Well off to bed then work but I'll return soon!

Wispr

Oh if I'm reading things right Izanami has learned a lot from her late lover. Great work!

Wispr

I really liked the chapter... the scene between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru was a real eye opener. Also love the fluff part between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Great work.

Wispr

I really like how things panned out between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Love Sesshoumaru's thoughts afterwards. Great work with the lovve interest between Shippou and Rin.

Wispr

How Kagome got back in her bed was very sweet. Like Rins reaction and teasing afterwards. Was wondering when Izanami was going to start to make waves. Very nasty ending with what Sesshoumaru saw!

Wispr

Awesome... bloody awesome. Love how Rin did the turn-about on Kagome. Also like Shippou being all grwon up... very cute.

Wispr

I truly think you did Kagome feelings about Inuyasha very realistic... really added more character depth to her. I like how Inuyasha is jealous of Sesshoumaru's interest and also what Seeshoumaru has figured out about Kagome.

Wispr

Like what they found out aobut Rin and also Kagome finding out how the villagers view her. Bloody funny scene with the checkers game... wonderful work writing such a missleading scene!

Wispr

Love how Kagome bares her toughts to Sesshoumaru and feeling a bit overwhelmed about things. Also like how she wantes to keep Rin. Love this chapters Sesshoumaru and Kagome interactions.

Wispr

Oh that really got me teary eye... and I'm a 39 yr guy!! lol  Awesome writing with everyones reactions, they were all in character and truly love the finale scene between Kaede and Inuyasha.

Wispr

Love the scene between Inuyasha and Kagome about Sesshoumaru. Truly heartwrenching how you are writng Kaede... fantastic work.

Wispr

Kaede's and Kagome's talk was bloody well done, you caught Kaede's characters peronalities spot on and I also like the look into her pass. Loce Kagome revelation about Sesshoumaru.

Wispr

Heartwrenching bit involving Kaede, but it really make the story so much more real. Love the writing of Sesshoumarus thoughts... really gave a wonderful view of is inner workings. His and Kagome conversation was brilliantly written.

Wispr

Great work with the wedding scene, very touching. Love the hints of a/maybe Shippou and Rin pairing. The bit with Sesshoumaru flirting was bloody well done!

Wispr

Great scene between Kagome and Inuyasha... love the ending scene with Sesshoumaru and Kagome, you're doing a wonderful job with their slowly developing relationship. Makes for a long and enjoyable read.

Wispr

First off I forgot in one of my older reviews to say how I love the scene between Inuyasha and Keade... when he was worried about her... very heartwarming.

Great work how you wrote Sesshoumaru's reactions to Kagome being alive, love their conversation. Nice seeing Rin back with Kagome.

Very interesting ending you had here... looking forward to see where you go with that!

Wispr