| I like the story, but I think you should have someone proofread the chapters before you post them. there are lots of errors.
joyouki (Chapter 3) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
| why didnt she just tell him what she saw and give him a chance to explain. This is really interesting please update soon!
joyouki (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Sep 2008
| oh this is juicy! I like what you got so far! please continue for many many chapters! You've got great stuff!
joyouki (Chapter 2) - Thu 18 Sep 2008
| wow, ten years we didn't get to read about. I hope you might have flash backs. I can't believe she would just run off. Sess probably didn't do anything and she jumped to conclusions so the pup had 10 years with out a dad. bummer! Well the rest should be as good as the first chapter! I'm loving it!
| can't believe u haven't gotten more reviews, update soon!!
bell (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Sep 2008
| I really like what you have so far. I cant wait to see what excuses Sess comes up with! Keep up the good work
| Muwahahahahaha! Good chapter. how is Kagome a demon? Some mating mutation thing? Any ways good chapter, cant wait until the next one!
ilenoir (Chapter 1) - Fri 05 Sep 2008
| Really good start! Can't wait to see what happens next. I am hooked!!
| Wow i second that! Other than a few spelling errors this is really good. post the next chapter soon plz!
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