| To be honest, this felt more like Naraku than Sesshoumaru. I can't imagine the proud lord lowering himself to bed a dead, human woman. His thoughts indicated a delusional, sexually twisted man. I don't see Sesshoumaru like that. That being said, I still liked the intelligence of the writing. The imagery (however disgusting) and hints were quite enjoyable. :)
A necrophilliac. If that isn't unique. I only had a feeling because I read your warning that she was dead or dying. I wouldn't believe I had just rrad it otherwise Lol. Great job.
-KD
Extremely dark! Wasn't expecting that, nice use of imagery in the beginning really tricks the reader but in a good way lol. I enjoyed it, hope to see more from you.
Wow...what do they call this? Necro something? But its kind of good. You only get the whole picture at the very end. It's really good. I like it. It's quite shocking but after readin Warm Bodies, I supposed it wasn't so shocking...:-D
This was great.
So, let me get this straight. Kagome is dead and Sesshoumaru killed her and had sex with her dead body. Am I wrong? Distubing but intriging as well. I like how you keep the mistery going until the very end. Very creative and slightly digusting but creative.
You did warn me after all.
I liked this story though I am a bit confused. Is sesshomaru a ghost of some sort? Either way u thought it was cute :)
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