Reviews for The Internal Dynamics by Zoe

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Nina (Chapter 10) - Thu 08 Aug 2013

I hate and love this story. I hate it because you give the PERFECT cliffhangers and I sit here looking at the screen just trying to figure out what in the Gods name just happened. BUTTTTT I love this fic cause I think it embodies Sesshomaru and his likeness. Very rarely have I read a fic that was this indepth and I crave more!! PLEASE update this as soon as possible. I can't WAIT to read more :))


Hassanah (Chapter 10) - Wed 31 Jul 2013

love it!!!!! please update soon XD XD XD


xxLadyBluejayxx (Chapter 10) - Tue 30 Jul 2013

LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!


NightQueen (Chapter 10) - Sun 28 Jul 2013

Oh how fabulous!  I just discover this story and read all 10 chapters in one sitting! I love it its wonderful to see such lovely character development and a wonderful story line. I can't wait for chapter 11!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Sun 28 Jul 2013

Finally Sesshomaru and Kagome kiss, I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. Please update the next chapter quick, keep it coming.


tonya (Chapter 10) - Sun 28 Jul 2013

what a great chapter!


Phyllis (Chapter 2) - Sun 28 Jul 2013

Another great one!  I'm sure Kagome thinks Sesshomaru's behavior is massively odd.  On to the next!


Phyllis (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Jul 2013

Very good first chapter!  I love Sesshomaru's attitude.  I can totally see him saying these things to Kagome.  And Rin is cute as ever!


Seraphina Dragon (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Jul 2013

i so hope to read more of this fun loveing story


snowbird (Chapter 8) - Fri 05 Jul 2013

I hope she doesn't come back with more of those uniforms I hate and are completely out of place in the woods and the past.  The anime ignored the facts:  when riding on the back of a person, skirt flaps up showing panties; legs exposed to be scratched in woods; showing panties trying to sit in short skirt on ground; skirt flapping up showing panties while jumping around during battle; countless other reasons.  No wonder Miroku is such a pervert.  lol

 

I think it was rather selfish of her to want to go home before checking on the kids.  They were injured when she last saw them.  She did not even ask if Sesshoumaru had seen them before coming to her rescue.


tonya (Chapter 9) - Fri 05 Jul 2013

great chapter!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Thu 04 Jul 2013

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Jun 2013

Keep it coming.


KAggie (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Jun 2013

I had fo re-read this story, but it was definitely worth it. :) I'm glad to see their relationship picking up at a steady pace! And that cabin scene was pretty steamy! I can't wait to read the next installment.  :D


tonya (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 Jun 2013

great chapter!


xxLadyBluejayxx (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 Jun 2013

I love this story! So great! I do have a tiny little question though. Why didn't Kaggers sit Inuyasha when he tried to rape her? He still has the necklace, right? IDK man! If Inuyasha was in my space and I was Kaggie, I would sit then purify him. But maybe Kagome was too emotionally  destaught to think about defense, huh? Sigh... I hope Kaggers gets the killing blow in this story. I know it might hurt Sesshoumaru's pride,but I think Kaggie would handle it better if she was the one to kill Inuyasha. But maybe Crazy Hanyou finds his inner peace and gets over himself... Who can tell? Lovely story!! It really is super!

 


RogueKittieKat (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 Jun 2013

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one. I am stuck out of state and far away from home and only have lovely fanfics for entertainment on my crappy hotel wifi so this is quenching my thirst!


Chandra (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Jun 2013

Please finish your story!!!! It's Amazing! Thanks


Katrina Kee (Chapter 7) - Sat 15 Jun 2013

I hate evil cliffhangers! Bring on the hero Sessy! Please continue this story!


RogueKittieKat (Chapter 7) - Fri 14 Jun 2013

Evil cliffhanger ending, I love it. Hope you keep updating.


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