OMG!!! this was OWESOME!!! what better revenge on Inuyasha than to lay with his hatred, hotter older brother??. This story has so much potential, I hope you continue it to at least a 2 or 3 chapter thing. I have an idea of what could work if you are interested, but I bet that with that master mind of yours, you provably have something wippep up for us!!!!
Akita (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Mar 2013
It would be great if you wrote more...You cant just leave it at this...I gotta have a back story and everything. Do they even get romantically involved?
I think you did excellent by creating a whole one-shot for 'saturate'. You definitely made the prompt justice! This was your first lemon? Well done! I do like seeing the domineering Sesshomaru most of all in smut. It was really hot and stimulating...all that dirty talk mhmmm *fans herself*
Continue with the hwatness? Heck yeah!
I believe you did an wonderful job. I think you should continue with this :)
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