| I love it! It's a bit different, but in a good way. Im wishing for a silver lining at the end,  because this story was left to our own imagination. I know Sesshomaru marked Kagome, but they were both under the influence of the moon. I hope to read similar works soon     
 | Please update???!!!    
 | I want a story pllllllllllease...... must......find......out......what......happens......    
 
Lumi (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 May 2013 | Quite a few of the sentences got chopped off at the beginning.    
 
Karmen (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 May 2013 | Thanks for posting this I enjoyed it. I love to read some smut once in a while lol, it was very well written!    
 
thumper (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Mar 2013 | it's good! hopefully one day you can build a story around this, but it can stand on it's own for now.    
 | Hey, that was really nicely writted. Besides a few grammatical errors that can be fixed through a little editting, I think you've got a really great story here. I'd be glad to edit for you and hope that you decide to continue the story. I think this has potential to be more than just a one-shot. Good job and thanks for the good read.         
 
nicole (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Mar 2013 |    
 | Fantastic. I must read more stories. I am a very honest reviewer and you deserve a positive review.    
 | I would like to see this continued.    
 | all fixed! and it was a good chapter! i'd really like to see more!    
 | This was good.    
 
Zeelian (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Mar 2013 | Wall of text critically hits for: Deathblow!   Aka it seems your formating got lost somewhere along the line making the text impossible to read and keep track of.    
       
 
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