hehrhehe i lovr it, it's both sexy and funny! i really wasnt expecting that endind but it was great. it reminds us that even thought shess is all powerful, he's still a dog. lol i cant waitfor the next one. happy writing!!^_^

This story is interesting and the first chapter was HOT!! Keep it coming.

HAHAHAHA!!! Oh my goodness, poor Sesshoumaru! Should have gone with the whipped cream... Loved it!!!