Very intriguing beginning to this story; looks quite promising. I wonder what caused Inuyasha to send Kagome away to live at the outpost (or why she chose to do so) and how Kagome managed to make a wish that made the jewel disappear (or did it actually disappear) while seemingly unpure as it turned Inuyasha into a full youkai.

Very promising first chapter!! I look forward to reading you again :)

Dewa Mata

I'm so glad you decided to write. This is a beautiful first chapter and I just know that I'm going to be giggling in pure excitement every time you get around to posting another. Thanks for giving me something to look forward to. 

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Hi, just read what you've posted and i'd like to say that i really enjoyed it. You have me hook line and sinker, hoping to see more writing from you soon!