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Starfyre (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 May 2013

What a facinating idea! A very interesting chapter. I wonder what will happen while she's inside the sacred tree, and I wonder what the others will think when they find her missing and her clothes at the bottom of the well.

Great update!

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


His Lady (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Mar 2013

This story has piqued my interest to say what were Kagome and Inuyasha talking about that he told he she was nothing. But then counting the circumstances i probably already know the answer to that question. 


(Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Mar 2013

Thanks, starfyre I'll correct them immediately! That is a great idea, at least it'll make my poor first chapter a little longer in appearance :) thanks for the review! :)


Starfyre (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Mar 2013

So far it sounds like the beginning of a really great story. There are a few minor errors that you might want to correct, like capitalization of I. I would recommend that you break up that last paragraph into several, or at least into two seperate ones.

The plot is good, and I look forward to where you will take this in the future.

Hope it helps for what it's worth!

:)

~Starfyre


Midnight (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Mar 2013

It's a great beginning. I hope to be able to read more soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Mar 2013

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Mar 2013

i like this so far i cant wait for the next chapter


xDori (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Mar 2013

ohh interesting.. 


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