Reviews for Our Subway Time by Smittee

Jai (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

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CritterWhisperer (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Feb 2010

I like this take of Sesshoumaru.  It's often how I view him; he behaves a certain way because it is expected of him but wants to be able to break away from that persona.  Very nice one-shot.  It would be nice to see a second chapter where Kagome tells him how she feels. 


Stacerue (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Feb 2010

You did an excellent job. You were very descriptive and the flow was good. Great choice of song too for sesshoumaru. I really enjoyed reading it and would like too see more.


Scherherazade (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Feb 2010

A very lovely, well written, beautiful story.  There were a coupled of word usage mistakes but they wre minor.  I don't usually like song fics but the lyrics you picked fit Sesshoumaru and the story perfectly.  You placed them in the right spot and the story flowed wonderfully.  By the end, I had a tear in my eye.  This story stands alone just fine but I'm so interested in how everything turns out that I hope someday you will continue it.


Sessylove219 (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Feb 2010

This one was very nice, What an appropriate song for Sessy, and an appropriate way to show his feelings. I liked that the song was all together, and not broken up into little bits. For the most part, that is why I stay away from songfics. Good job. Continue???


Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Feb 2010

this was very nice to read, im not particularily a fan of song fics but this one was tastefully done, i myself didnt notice any grievious errors in grammar or spelling, so i say well done and keep it up:D


Angelicatt (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Feb 2010

Oh plz tell me you are not going to leave it like that...it's too sweet to be a oneshot. He's got to get his Ipod back after all.

There was a couple of spelling booboos and I definitely appreciated how you placed the lyrics all together and did not need to break up the paragraphs like most song fics. It is a highly appropriate song for the demon that he is.


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Feb 2010

Very nicely written.  The story flowed rather well, great use of discriptions, it was easy to imagine and feel what they were feeling.  I would love to see this continued, as it is a great start to a beautiful romance between the two, but even as is, it is an amazing story.  Amazing job :).


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